Post by geox on Apr 27, 2018 2:01:44 GMT
In all seriousness, those are really good. I'd be proud to have written any of them. I will say--and I notice this phenomenon in my own writing--sometimes when you look deeply at stories like this, you can see positive things--and they really are positive!--and these leave you with an untenably positive position on the story as a whole. I mean my lord, sure, there's some nice art in places in some of these, but that doesn't make them any less enervating. So say I!